Sherry, as a result of your suggestions, I’ve made some changes to Policy Governance Ubiquitous.
There is a new first paragraph. It begins:
If you are reading this you probably have heard of Policy Governance®. If you are a board member…
In addition to drawing in the reader by starting talking about you, it also outlines what the whole article is about. I think that improves the essay form.
I’ve then made a number of small changes throughout the article.
Finally, I’ve changed its status from private to public. So any visitor will be able to read it.